In an effort to live up to my word of trying out things I'm bad at so that I can get good at them... I tried to draw out the first chapter of my fanfic like a comic. XD

It didn't turn out too bad for roughs I think.

And since it's "shorthand"... i wrote the dialog in short net speak. XD;;; so it's very very very silly. D calls it "fanfic in 30 seconds with bunnies transformers."


Okay, I laid them out like comic book pages. I think you can plainly see where the "pages" are divided at. XD There's no layout to this in terms of within the page... just the rough panels. I've never done a comic book before because i kept telling myself I couldn't. I consulted the how to draw comics the marvel way, the great tome of wisdom that it is, and got some better ideas. I also have comics and sequential art by will eisner- but he's a little more indepth and I get a bit lost. I'm really bad with composition.

It's really messy, it's just roughs for me to draw out later... don't worry if you can't tell what's going on. Like I said, sort of drawing short hand. :3

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the written fic is here if you want to read it so you know what's going on X3

transformers belong to hasbro!